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 Each SoR record fires an event when it detects a person previously unknown to the SoR. The event label is something like 
 'noticedNewPerson' and the message will include the {Sorid} and an SoR-generated unique identifier for that person.
 
-MVService: create subscriber to 'noticedNewPerson'; Its only function is to generate a new internal identifier, link it to the Sorid-assigned unique identifier and persist that info.
+Create a Person Registry subscriber to 'noticedNewPerson'; Its only function is to generate a new internal registry identifier, link it to the Sorid-assigned unique identifier and persist that info.
 
-If ID Match is implemented and detects the need to merge two existing identities, send a 'mergeableIdentitiesFound' that the person registry will pick up and process appropriately.
+If ID Match is implemented and detects the need to merge two existing identities, send a 'mergeableIdentitiesFound' for the person registry to pick up and process appropriately.
 
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