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@@ -555,11 +555,11 @@ <h3 id="_change_log">Change Log</h3>
 <td class="tableblock halign-left valign-top"><p class="tableblock">Nicholas Roy</p></td>
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 <td class="tableblock halign-left valign-top"><p class="tableblock">Added information about PGP key usage</p></td>
 <td class="tableblock halign-left valign-top"><p class="tableblock">February 17, 2020</p></td>
 <td class="tableblock halign-left valign-top"><p class="tableblock">1.6</p></td>
+<td class="tableblock halign-left valign-top"><p class="tableblock">Nicholas Roy</p></td>
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@@ -646,10 +646,7 @@ <h3 id="_initial_contactnotification_and_triage">Initial Contact/Notification an
 <p><strong><em>Inquiries from any law enforcement agency regarding a security incident, including formal legal process such as subpoenas and warrants, must be directed to the General Counsel of Internet2.</em></strong></p>
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-<p><strong>IF YOU HAVE A PGP KEY</strong> You can use InCommon&#8217;s PGP public key to encrypt sensitive information you send to us via email. Information on this key is available at: <a href="https://incommon.org/incident-reponse/">https://incommon.org/incident-reponse/</a></p>
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-<p><strong>IF YOU DO NOT HAVE A PGP KEY, DO NOT</strong> communicate any sensitive information via these channels.  Internet2 staff will set up a secure communications channel with you, if need be, after your initial request is received</p>
+<p>You can use InCommon&#8217;s PGP public key to encrypt sensitive information you send to us via email. Information on this key is available at: <a href="https://incommon.org/incident-reponse/">https://incommon.org/incident-reponse/</a>. <strong>DO NOT</strong> send sensitive information in unecrypted email.</p>
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 <p>The CSIRT will accept, evaluate and reply (when necessary and deemed appropriate) to valid submissions as soon as possible, but in no event later than 24 hours after receipt of the notice.</p>
@@ -1062,7 +1059,7 @@ <h3 id="_appendix_b_acknowledgements">Appendix B: Acknowledgements</h3>
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-Last updated 2020-02-17 13:51:21 -0700
+Last updated 2020-02-17 14:29:12 -0700
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@@ -90,9 +90,7 @@ Any party may make the CSIRT aware of a relevant security incident or disclosure
 
 *_Inquiries from any law enforcement agency regarding a security incident, including formal legal process such as subpoenas and warrants, must be directed to the General Counsel of Internet2._*
 
-*IF YOU HAVE A PGP KEY* You can use InCommon's PGP public key to encrypt sensitive information you send to us via email. Information on this key is available at: https://incommon.org/incident-reponse/[https://incommon.org/incident-reponse/]
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-*IF YOU DO NOT HAVE A PGP KEY, DO NOT* communicate any sensitive information via these channels.  Internet2 staff will set up a secure communications channel with you, if need be, after your initial request is received
+You can use InCommon's PGP public key to encrypt sensitive information you send to us via email. Information on this key is available at: https://incommon.org/incident-reponse/[https://incommon.org/incident-reponse/]. *DO NOT* send sensitive information in unecrypted email.
 
 The CSIRT will accept, evaluate and reply (when necessary and deemed appropriate) to valid submissions as soon as possible, but in no event later than 24 hours after receipt of the notice.